Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?
In the modern society, there is a fact that a majority of people hold their belief that having late childbirth is the good choice for them. From a personal perspective, this phenomenon can be attributable to a host of relevant factors and this essay shall seek several adverse impacts that the situation exerts on individuals and society.
On the one hand, there are two principal root causes of the predicaments. First and foremost, adults must face up to a plethora of matters addressed in daily lives, especially the financial burden. Basically, children often need prescribed feedings, medical care and specific clothes which put most of parents (most parents or most of the parents) in economic pressure. Therefore, they are not willingness to become a father or a mother at an early age.
A further noticeable point is that young generations have the desire to focus on their career to earn a living. They believe that they prioritize occupation to have the highly chance to seek for a well- paid job, hence, they are able to make their life more prosperous. As a result, more time being allocated to work instead of kids, which makes couples consider that a late childbirth is an ideal decision.
On the other hand, all the aforementioned motivation may pose some major repercussions to a few particular areas in life. In the first place, based on experts’ researchers, getting pregnant for women at later ages is less likely to be possible for the mother’s body becomes more and more aging. It’s past golden time to give birth a healthy baby. For instance, there are many reported cases that it is highly likely for women to breed a disadvantaged and handicapped kid as soon as being born. Futhermore,(thay bang; Furthermore) this tendency can bring a significant adverse impacts on society. It can cause a decline in the working- age population and the deprivations of labour workforce. This can be examplified (thay bang: exemplified)by the case of China. This nation is observing the aging population in a tremendous level in light of the ideology of young people to have no children or have offspring in a later period. This leads to reach a deadlock in development, especially on national budgets.
To summarise, on account of paying attention on career and economic difficulties, adults decide to delay having children to future. And this issues will certainly have detrimental impacts on both families and national development. From my point of view, national and local authorities should take some measures into consideration to ameliorate this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
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Suggestion: , thay
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'impact'?
Suggestion: impact
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05399061033 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93932054003 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572769953052 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3376217654 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.523809524 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225614799361 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584106316551 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607452119192 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113145325322 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655582805494 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.