What do you think is most important to a lasting friendship The other party can help they have the same interests and worldviews about what matters they trust each other | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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What do you think is most important to a lasting friendship? The other party can help; they have the same interests and worldviews about what matters; they trust each other.

Throughout our lives, we meet different types of people. Some become our long-lasting friends, while others disappear in our memories. This leads me to think that the main consideration to make keep a long healthy friendships. There are a number of ways to make long time relationships like assisting friends in trouble, fully trusting each other, or having same kind of interests and thoughts. Among all these the most important is to have similar view points and interests.
To start with, friends enjoy more often when they have identical interests. When they can find common enjoyment, they are more likely to spend more time with each other and this can make their bond stronger. By sharing fun moments they can ensure long-term relationship without any burden. For instance, I along with my friend, Peri love to exercise daily and whenever I want to enjoy outdoor workout, I ask her to meet at beach to do cycling. Since she also likes to do exercise, we enjoy a lot talking and playing. I have been knowing her since ten years and exercising makes us meet daily. This makes us feel closer and connected.
Second, friends can make their friendship last longer if they have same kind of perspectives. They can get to know each other better while discussing the issues. By having deeper conversation, they can feel more connected to each other. In fact, sharing similar ideas can help them feel a sense of kinship. Therefore, this accumulated comparability encourages them to be closer and build stronger friendship. When I met my best friend, Ria, we had registered for a same course in political science and we used to talk about current issues. To our utter surprise, we noticed that we shared similar sort of viewpoints. As a result, we exchanged our ideas without reluctance and were able to relate to each other better. Until now, friends who had analogous perspective with me are still good friends of mine.
To sum up, I think the most crucial factor to maintain longer relationships is having similar interests and views on vital issues. This is because friends can have fun by relishing same interests and can build a stronger relationship while having a deeper conversation more easily.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friendship'?
Suggestion: friendship
...nsideration to make keep a long healthy friendships. There are a number of ways to make lon...
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Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[1]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'have known'
Suggestion: have known
..., we enjoy a lot talking and playing. I have been knowing her since ten years and exercising make...
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Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...enjoy a lot talking and playing. I have been knowing her since ten years and exercising make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in fact, kind of, sort of, as a result, to start with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92225201072 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69092519844 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55764075067 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5225528845 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8260869565 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2173913043 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297481501988 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863634069003 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773048992633 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181659887549 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305194990576 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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