Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Every single person have different lifestyle such as to decides dwelling in summer or winter. In my opinion, both of this season is depend from the person.
On the other hand, almost half of the worldwide have multi season. For Example, Indonesia is one of the country with summer season, this cause because of Indonesia in equator line, and majority of society who lived in this nation was usual with this season and deciding to choose summer even some people vulnerable became sick with winter season. Moreover, people was born in summer country will feel happy and comfortable with the weather in their nation. Sometimes, people who visiting another country with different season will have distinct sensation, therefore every single person have place that can make their convenient.
Winter season being happiness of each person, many reason why people pick to stay in country with the winter season. Usually, the cause is place of born, and sometimes visitors more interested to lives in there because in their country is nothing this season, and the landscape of winter country more better than summer country. Therefore, many people come to Korea, Europe and another country to look at view of winter and compare with their country.
To conclude, i believe that every single person have cozy place to dwelling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...why people pick to stay in country with the winter season. Usually, the cause is place of born, a...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...on, and the landscape of winter country more better than summer country. Therefore, many pe...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mpare with their country. To conclude, i believe that every single person have c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, even so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08294930876 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2630435091 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539170506912 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5465250783 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152062173017 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680618639845 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341108198133 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822732940202 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524181644616 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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