More people are travelling to other countries. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?
More and more people nowadays are choosing to travel to other countries. From my point of view, this idea is positive outweigh negative because of a rise in income and finance of a country.
Firstly, some people want to explore new places to enquire about the customs, tradiotions or about the local peipke's lives. This is more suitable for people who are interested in history and corncerned about heritage destructions.
Abother reason for supporting the positive idea is that tourists can hace a more compregensive overview of different places and have the comparision about the quality of life in their country with other destinations. A proof for this, based on research, people who have a tendancy to travel have a happier and more fullfilling life.
Finally, travel abroad can help people find their place in the world. Almost everyone all have their own places of interest which make them refresh their mind and get out of sttuggles. For instance, when travelling is combined with experience, people can realize how beautiful the worlwide is and how woth living.
In conclusion, it is a good and positive way to enlarge your knowledge about a new life, a new world, a new nation. Furthermore, travelling is not only for relaxing but also for finding new things in a new country, a new destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99090909091 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76053953284 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2121846075 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8181818182 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264663195148 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109908225704 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956824194126 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154909379317 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1013563119 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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