Some students spend hours every day on their smart phones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In this modern era, technology such as mobile phones plays a crucial role in everbody's life especially turors. Nowadays, they prefer to spend lots of time on these gadgets. Although there is a plethora of reasons why students use smart phones, therefore, through this essay I am going to explain the basic root of this concern and elaborate how this is considered as a negative development in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are ample of factors due to which pupil's give priority to spend time on electronic gadgets. The first and the foremost is neglected by parents due to their busy schedule. because of hectic schedules parents allow their kids to use cell phones for various sorts of activities education, and video games for example. A survey was conducted by California University that about 80 percent of people work around the clock. As a result, their children spend their time on mobile gadgets. In addition, online learning rather than traditional teaching and learning is more prominant in the present century. A huge amount of group activities, assignments and regular basis home tasks assigned to students. Thus, above discussed factors shows that why disciple utilize this electronic media.
In my point of view, this is a negative development as it directly affects eye vision. Even though students spend numbers of hours on cell phones to complete their home task activities, or doing assignments, harmful radiations emit from screen affects the functioning of cone and rod cells. Besides this, if mentor plays online games while using this technology it cause mental fatigue. Hence, students face mental stress, which ultimately leads to change in behaviour. So, I believe that it has negative impacts on students health.
In conclusion, using mobile phones for number of hours by students is now a main concern because of parents working hours and neglecting their children and day to day school activities which are done by online media. But, this trend is responsible for health ailments. Consequently, this is a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21194029851 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69547445454 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3708920822 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8947368421 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360317269258 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950957368868 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723030093248 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22623997093 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651505100791 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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