Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim
that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face
education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays teaching online is becoming more popular around the world. Some people believe that online education has a lot of useful sides than face to face education and consequently it will take traditional teaching's place in the future. But others believe that face to face education is unique for us. I strongly believe that the merits of e learning are much more than face to face education.
Admittedly, these days a lot of people prefer to learn online at schools or universities rather than traditionally teaching. Because it is easy and suitable for them and so they can save their time for learing much more knowledge. Today is modern technologies time and every where is equipped with computers, flashcards, projectors and wi fi. This help us to teach everything online not going to the libraries or courses.
Neverthless, others believe that face to face education is irreplaceable and nothing can take its place. Our generations learned about the enviroinment or science by traditional teaching with help of teachers a long years ago. If people go to the school or universities and teach usual style they will interact with each others and explore how to communicate. Because of this sides, usual learning system is unique and perfect.
In conclusion, in the future e learning will obtain main role in the world and a lot of people will continue to learning with such way. Although, others will prefer traditional system for education. Therefore, in my opinion online education is the best way for people and it can help to save time.
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- Online education is becoming more and more popular Some people claim that e learning has so many benefits that it will replace face to face education soon Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable Discuss both views and give your opinion 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03861003861 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80920867404 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53667953668 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0325749072 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364659362993 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12580099363 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957478507641 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224728103998 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121148788129 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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