The graph shows the propotion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
The chart illustrates the percentage of the elderly who are 65 or over from 1940 to 2040 in three different countries.
Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of elderly people in three countries are increase. Inaddition, the figure for Japan was the lowest for most of the period.
In 1940, the percentage of residents aged 65 and over in American was the highest, in comparison with that of Japan at 9% and 5% respectively. Over the following 40 years, the figure for the USA increased significantly to 15% after it experienced a marginal decrease of 14% in 2020 before rising remarkably and ending at 23% in 2040 . Similarly, there was a dramatical rose to 15% in the percentage of sweden during the period of 60 years from 1940 to 2000. Conversely, the proportion of elderly people who are 65 or over in Japan witnessed a slight decline to 3% in 2000.
Moreover, that figure of sweden is expected to dramatically increase to 20% after it decreased by 2% in 2020 before ending the period at 25% in 2040. Similarly, the percentage of elderly people in Japan marginal rise to 10% in 2020. In addition, the proportion of the populations aged 65 and over increase dramatically to 27% and become the most popular of the chart in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: .
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...rsely, the proportion of elderly people who are 65 or over in Japan witnessed a slight ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, moreover, similarly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67123287671 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85574308982 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470319634703 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6934711777 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240484611067 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103108523345 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963766660211 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168005636704 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856633107015 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.