Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.
Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?
Many families to day organise further classes for their teenager after school at the weekends because they belive that this is a significant thing to do, but on other aspect some people think that children have enough education at school. In my oppinion both views have their own benefit and drawback with each person. The following essay will analyse these statement more clearly.
On the one hand, extra classes after school will improve their knowledge, it help children can be understand the lesson which they study at school more correctly. following this, student will be more confident and they fell interested for learning and trainning themselves at the school. Furthermore, further classes usually divide the lesson appropriate with each student's ability, it mean that teenager can learn with their friends who have the same level, aim and goal with them. For instance, at extra classes children can be concentrate in studying and do not take any disturb, annoy or bother form the bad student. In negative aspect, teenagers will not have any time for relaxing, entertaining and taking leisure. after the lecture at school children have to go for training at extra classes, it make them very tired, out of energy and pessured.
On the other hand, with young peoples who just only education at school will have more time for resting to do whatever they like, and play anythings they want. Especially they will have enough time for improving their life's skills which is very important in the future. Moreover, student will have the time for self learning to prepare and practise the knowledge which they study at school. teenagers can also creative their own way and method to appropriate with them. For example, children do not have denpend too much on their teacher for giving them knowledge, they can find the information of knowledge which they want to learn in a lot of website like wiki, google and document. In addition, at the higer level teenager really need tutor at further classes to help them the hard knowledge which is the best effective way and tip for learning that knowledge.
To conclude, learning at extra classes or just education at school are have their own advantage and drawback appropriate with each person, so parents need to have a good choice for their children to impove them better than before and become helpful with their country in the near future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9650872818 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.391278049 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488778054863 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0023111534 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4375 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376835282889 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145083947305 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11650757252 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284629092363 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624445583299 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.