Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?
In the modern society, many parents expect their children to become extraordinary people. In my opinion, this is a negative trend that may lead to unnecessary pressure put on children. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for this phenomenon, as well as giving some arguments explaining my point of view on the problem.
Considering the causes, I believe there are two main reasons. To begin with, society seems to be becoming increasingly competitive, which concerns a large number of parents. For example, house prices and other living expenses have been risen remarkably, compared to 30 years ago. Therefore, many people fear that their children cannot afford a desirable life unless they are so outstanding. Next, people who fail to achieve their ambitions when they were young also might expect their children to fulfill their dreams. This can cause substantial pressure to some youngsters, especially when they wish to go on their own paths.
As regards the consequences, I think this trend is more likely to bring more disadvantages than advantages. First of all, an exceeding amount of expectation could cause stress, depression and other mental issues to young people. For instance, in some Asian countries, many students are in constant anxiety because they cannot achieve any prominent academic achievements. Secondly, as society is changing rapidly, the definition of success differs from generation to generation. With that being said, the successful role model that older people give their children may be old-fashioned, or even inappropriate in the future. Thus, giving children early orientations to follow does not seem to be advisable.
All in all, there are many people putting high expectations on their children because of their personal dreams and opinions. Although this is usually because they want their children to have a desirable life, it leads to some negative outcomes, making it a negative trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ncreasingly competitive, which concerns a large number of parents. For example, house prices and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e outcomes, making it a negative trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as regards, for example, for instance, i think, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.332247557 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85409314867 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.754747784 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.2941176471 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265569557734 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081430153149 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744808577139 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188632050456 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927890086434 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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