“Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.”
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It's impossible to deny that nowadays we live in a competitive environment and have lots of opportunities for finding a good job. Some people believe that getting an education with the help jf university is a best way for getting a job in the future because a university can give skills that can be useful. Others argue that person can become a successful worker only in practice. In this essay I am going to express my opinion on this issue.
To begin with, a university is the main part of socialization in our fast changing world. Modern university gives students applied knowledge that can help in all professions. For example, HSE University have classes of digital literacy that shows how to use different types of programms. It's useful for my future job and guarantee a high salary because now it's demand.
Despite these facts, it should be said that there are lots of professions that require experience and applied skills. Such kind of knowledge could be get only by real work. For example, a person can't be an amazing interpreter without practise and getting experience in real life, for example, by talking to native speakers.
In conclusion, I would like to say that a university is a fundamental part in a professional way because a person can't be a valuable worker without any knowledge that got from smart people with extensive work experience. Not for school, but for life we study. This phrase fits perfectly and I absolutely agree with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ducation with the help jf university is a best way for getting a job in the futur...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nly by real work. For example, a person cant be an amazing interpreter without pract...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a professional way" with adverb for "professional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...that a university is a fundamental part in a professional way because a person cant be a valuable wor...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... in a professional way because a person cant be a valuable worker without any knowle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81673306773 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8080895461 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6629455758 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3571428571 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244176186946 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072178299392 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745837899439 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142614538105 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669368531028 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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