In come cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.
It’s perceived by many that in some countries or some culture, parents usually teach their children a lesson that if they try their best, they are able to achieve any accomplishments as they wish to. This essay will analyse merits and de merits of giving kids this lesson.
To begin with, the first thing which I would like to mention is that all parents all over the world wish the best things for their children. That’s why they will teach their sons and daughters lessons which they want to guide children how to overcome bad situations that they might have in life. This is because there are not only easy things but also challenge which children have to deal with. Indeed, the slogan “You can achieve anything if you try hard enough” is really effective way to encourage young generation to try their best. As a result, they can win what they want. For instance, a six_year_old kid fails the examination at school, she can give up because she does not believe that she can pass the exam without the encouraging from her mother or her dad. Undoubtedly, this message will help the kid try studying lessons and does the test again with a good outcome.
On the other hand, there is a drawback if young people have a strong belief that they are able to get anything if they give enough efforts which might leads to unexpected results. For example, adults wish their boys or girls become artists like famous painter while those young people do not have any talents in this field. In addition, they think they do not succeed because they did not practice enough. Consequently, they will spend a lot of time even all their life on painting but they cannot become artists. In other words, parents should make the meaning of this message clear by explaining that sometimes we have to give up because our abilities are limited in some circumstances.
In conclusion, the benefit of the message is that it can help young generation solve an abundance of problems in life. Meanwhile, the drawback is that children might believe in this message without considering the limit of human’s abilities.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77534246575 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42518220467 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53698630137 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.175332946 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372316127018 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12724833209 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712241320029 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226159581664 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574985073952 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77534246575 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42518220467 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53698630137 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.175332946 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372316127018 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12724833209 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712241320029 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226159581664 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574985073952 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.