Some people believe that children nowadays have too much freedom. Others believe that children are protected too much by their parents. Which of these statements do you agree with?
It is sometimes argued that many parents are over-protective of their children. While this could be true to a certain extent, I believe current-generation kids are given too much freedom than required. To explain my view, I will analyze this thesis in the essay below.
To begin with, as technology undergoes a great evolution, children now use smart electronic devices from a very young age, and in addition, they are free to use social media platforms frequently. Whereas this could help kids grow their social and communication skills as well as improve their ability to think independently and creatively, the child's lack of differentiating capacity can generate a bad impact on their behaviors as they absorb inappropriate things. A good example of this is there are age-restricted contents on Tiktok app that are still watched by kids, leading them to imitate bad behaviors. Besides, numerous online entertaining factors including video games, chatting with friends, binge-watching movies, etc are over-abused, resulting in children's apathy toward family.
Secondly, educated parents are more likely to have a fresh view of self-improvement’s importance for young people, consequently, children often receive unconditional support from parents, which can be considered that children are able to do what they want. Unfortunately, some parents may blindly accept all the requests from their kids while they do not have enough skills to choose a direction for the future or distinguish between right and wrong. Consequently, their lives can go on astray and become worse later on.
In conclusion, in addition to giving children the freedom to grow, parents should intervene appropriately in their child's growth process to put them on the right path. Parental orientation to children is very important, however, children also need their personal space in order to fully grow up
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41836734694 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1805194709 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659863945578 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9518518255 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5833333333 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273216760429 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890525825886 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638573735657 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15912429539 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524333808854 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.