People in many countries are spending less time with their families. What are the reasons, and effects of this?
There is a growing concern about the deterioration in family relations in a host of nations. This essay attempts to shed light on some driving factors behind this negative tendency before clarifying several detrimental impacts to individuals and the whole community.
On the one hand, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why citizens in this day and age use less of their treasured time with family members. The key rationale is that busy schedules deprive the hours of the family. To illustrate, these corporations require the employee's protracted working time to finish the deadlines on time, which acts as a double-edged sword to the lack of family time. Another justification is due to technology overuse, significantly more people, especially the young generation, are becoming overly addicted to digital devices. This perception could be further clarified by the fact that younger prefer to spend time texting to their friends via social media such as Facebook or Instagram rather than engage in conversation with their parents.
These aforementioned reasons have left scores of undesirable influences on this trend. First and foremost, the more widen the emotional gap, the more weaken the bond among family members. If parents spend more time working and less time bonding with as well as relating to their children, they are very likely to be negatively affected by toxic influences from bad friends or their media consumption. Furthermore, insufficient time for family does have an adverse implication for the family. To be more clarified, this trend could be seen as a precursor to weakening family relationships, leading to some conflicts or family problems, such as parents arguing, domestic violence, or divorce in the worst- cases scenario.
In conclusion, there are several underlying motives behind the increasingly less quality of family time and it makes a way for a myriad of serious repercussions among family members and society as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30573248408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94026840669 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6715851569 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330615382104 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106497765936 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835574173439 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184615983787 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816227313985 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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