Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people think that it would be better if the majority of staff worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. In may opinion this view has both benefits and drawbacks with each person and each situation. The following essay will analyse this statement in deepth.
On the one hand, working at home is very convinience for the citizens, they do not have wake up too early for going to their business or companies. The individuals can use all of their energy, strongth and concentrate to contribute their ability for the companies. Furthermore, citizens who work at home have not take any pressure or stress from their colleague, boss and manager. they can be more confident, comfortable and break out away from stress to have wonderful effective achivement for their business. For instance, teenagers or adults will not get any terrible things from their bad staff who was very jeolous with their ability. In addition, human who work at home can be free for doing whatever they want and reduce the amount of rules they have to obey from their managers. they can creative their own ideal following that, the amazing content will appeared.
On the other hand, staff who work at home will not have the guidance for older generation from their business, this can be their disadvantage with other colleague. the individuals can be easier to get horrible mistake and also they can go in wrong way or method in their job. Moreover, there were no compete or striving between colleagues in their companies. When working at home, people will be very lonely and more terrible that they have not any motivation for inproving themselves. For example, people can learn a plenty of good ability from their staff and also their colleagues are their motivation for improving their career in the near future.
To conclude, the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day have its own advantages and drawback appropriate with each person, so the individuals need to have a bright choice to impove their career and that chocie can have both develop to their companies and their family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90304709141 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53416734417 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498614958449 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2315792256 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250459095903 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108662260163 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146975925819 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207424544379 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798583023448 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.