Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In terms of science and technology, last century is considered as the golden era of technological invention. It is argued by most of the modern people that computer is the most significant invention in the last century. I completely agree with this opinion. I will exlplain the reasons in the following paragraphs to justify my viewpoint.
In the last ten decades, world observed multiple technological breakthrough that changed the peoples working procedure, job sector, education and every aspects of life. Amon them, computer is considered as the father of all invention. Myriad of reasons can be highlighted to depict the significance of computer over the others. Firstly, computer changed the mathematical calculation system to a tremendously faster way, that helped to operate numerous practical functions in our daily life very easily and efficiently. The coding and machine language which is the basis of computer operation, made the big data analysis and storage simpler. Internet based online communication system could be implemented due to the availability of the computer. Computer made the use of algorithm in creating multiple creative ideas like video platforms, video editing, emailing, writing and so on. Moreover, computer made the space travelling possible that could not be done before. Nowadays, there is no need for paper for writing and sending letter to someone living in a distant place. It is possible to write in computer and send message or letter instantly to anyone at anytime. Besides, online audio and visual communication system was possible to made because of computer. In general, computer made our life easier compared to the period when computer was not availble. For example, we can now study at home without even any physical paper book. We can do all the office works, keeps all the data stored in a secured place in a computer folder. This made the life lot easier.
To sum up, the world has changed very rapdly after the computer was invented. This changing is going on even faster beyond our imagination, where computer is playing a central role.
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- Write about the following topic Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ow 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n system was possible to made because of computer. In general, computer made our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18584070796 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83055218154 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578171091445 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6365503216 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7142857143 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170345534495 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521538303852 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403020443918 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122528944526 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604335800601 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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