Write about the following topic:
Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Being a citizen of India, we are closer to this topic as well as situation of poverty. Besides this, we also agree that except India every country has poor people living in. Therefore, each country has a range of ways to deal with poor folks. There are several reasons behind this world poverty. In this article, we will discuss the numerous reasons behind this low economic zone citizen and the ways that could be helpful for them to lead a better lifestyle.
In my opinion, there are lots of reasons for which country has this poverty issues such as: fewer jobs, minimum wedges, and high charges in school. To get rid of these issues we must bring certain changes to the entire constitution of those countries.
First of all, countries like India or others, the government must launch the fixed minimum wage criteria like CANADA or USA to keep the economic level better than current scenario.
Secondly, there must new job categories, for which new people can be appointed. Therefore, they can feed their family as well as provide the basic education which must be a birthright as well.
Thirdly, government must declare free education till the age of 18 for all schools like other Western countries. Education must not be limited to those who are having money to teach their child.
In conclusion, being a responsible citizen, we must take steps to give free tuition to the poor people nearest to our homes. Also, helping people with food or clothes is also another way to support them. There are NGOs who runs campaign for blood, cloth, book, food donation. We must involve ourselves in such social help. For example, I myself involve in book and cloth donations locally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85121107266 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32428612844 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9781568368 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4705882353 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26105340799 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830836139087 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636313065703 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110689925468 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077446325738 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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