Some old people today struggle with the use of modern techonologies such as smartphones and computers.
What is the cause of this?
What are some possible solutions?
Looking at the task below, which is concerning the modern technology process that is running nowadays, a higher fraction of elderly people still find this new modernity such a hard thing to understand; Therefore, it's evident the way in which two wide views related to the question why and how to resolve, give the opportunity to analyse and declare a proper idea.
The first view is associated with the cause of why someone continues to struggle with technology today and related there are several reasons connected. Here is why it is important to evaluate any circumstance. For instance, one motivation can be because, think that their capacity to memorise is not helpful as it used to be, elderly people prefer to pay attention to items of easier use, rather than new technics like computers or smartphones.
In comparison, we find those who, despite their ages, are knowledgeable enough to daily use it. One clear example is that they always try to push themselves, without creating any limits, keeping to practice and training their memory.
In my view, for example, everything might also depend on who is around you. Having a family member behind can be helpful for those who have reached a certain age, they need someone who explains all the news that will develop in the future.
In conclusion, with what has already been mentioned, it's crucial to highlight the efficacy to keep training and practice any activity that, even the phase of your life, keeps you fresh and ready for any kind of environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94921875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6247878216 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671875 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0518369237 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.777777778 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133248458064 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442688411748 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048523715527 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609968791651 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501597515735 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.