Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it
Some think that advertising is increasing day by day and say that the brands of binemen have become very popular and other people say that many people ignore advertising and think they do not care anymore people think that.
Advertisements and brands are increasing day by day and the demand for advertising is increasing very much and many people think that advertising is very important and rightly so because they use advertising to promote and promote their personal brand and many advertise on television and how they make their personal brands known is very important in our lives and in the way we sell goods .
But in the 21st century, many people ignore advertising because advertising companies put out too many advertising and 90 percent of people ignore them and now people have to find another solution and there are many solutions for this, one of them is the instagram platform where many companies and brands advertise their products started to advertise and a lot of people stopped advertising on television but small companies did because they were not very popular yet.
In conclusion is that television would have been great if they had done a lot of advertising and more people would have watched it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n our lives and in the way we sell goods . But in the 21st century, many people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97087378641 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63426368123 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470873786408 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.658847444 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.0 106.682146367 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307129997779 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210011674706 0.084324248473 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866159636669 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210011674706 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866159636669 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 78.4519038076 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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