1️⃣ Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A school of thoughts holds that conducting and managing scientific projects by the government is preferred than individual companies. From my perspective, I have the same idea with this notion which will be illustrated in this essay in detail.
First of all, the government can ensure the safety of these researches more considerably than private companies. Although scientific research can find out the convenient method and new cure to improve the quality of our lives, it still has tons of detrimental influences. For instance, some toxic virus were invented illegally in terms of having an experiment. We can't identify exactly what a scientist really looks for when he or she carried out a research in privacy. Therefore, if their unknown intentions are related to politics and international rivals, it can easily have lots of moral implications and effect significantly on society, environment, even human health, etc.
On one hand, strict law always exists to prevent researchers from doing the violent actions, sexual activities, wasting money in the experimental process. In some laboratories, several cosmetic industries used to use animals such as monkeys, rabbits, mice and so on to measure the impacts and effective usages of chemical products which result in the physical pain of their bodies. Apart from causing the painful issues on mammals, conducting a scientific research is pricey indeed costing the large amounts of money. The obligations, written by the government can solve this problem due to the fact that their budget can be contributed to these scientific projects in an useful way with the detailed statistics.
To sum up, my point of view is displayed in this essay, containing obviously the pros when government carry out and control scientifically a experimental projects . Thus, I insisted that we should be strongly supportive and raise funds for government organization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly in terms of having an experiment. We cant identify exactly what a scientist reall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, as to, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03414489659 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9746330834 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209484202652 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706082863856 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504195797175 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124222603956 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408268361149 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.