You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend to tell them about it.
In your letter:
- Explain why you have moved
- Describe the new apartment
- Invite him to pay a visit
You are aware that I have moved out of my formal house. I decided to move out of the house because of the poor attitude of my landlord in maintaining the house. He does not respond when the house need general repairs. For instance, I took him four weeks to fix a broken boiler in the house during last winter.
My new house is a spacious three bedrooms flat and located near major bus routes with many shops within three to four minutes walking distance. It also has a park within seven minutes’ walk away from my house which my kids are very excited about. The landlord is also very friendly and understanding.
I will like to invite you for a visit. My wife and kids are looking forward to having you. We are preparing to cook one of your favourite food. If you don’t mind, you can come along with a friend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...o very friendly and understanding. I will like to invite you for a visit. My wife...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 667.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35947712418 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25580165816 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1442922885 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6363636364 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224955527009 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889040006706 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626875211083 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149578910635 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716056069273 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.2329268293 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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