Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature? Do you think we can stop children from becoming criminals?
Some argue that the cause of becoming a criminal is the consequence of their instincts. Although that reason is a part of the causative factors, I believe that environmental and educational effects are the most significant reason to contributing criminal behavior. Therefore, avoid children from growing up in dangerous communities can prevent them from becoming criminals.
Opponents of this argument think that genetics from their parents play an important role in participating in building an individual’s character. For instant, children living with parents who have criminal records such as stealing, drug addiction, lack of self-control, or inhumanity are easy to take a shape of a criminal. They often have a tendency to violent behavior from preschool children.
Though genetics can have a strong impact on children's personalities, I believe that environmental influences are the main reason. Because children learn everything from their living environment. If they are raised in a bad community with a neighborhood or their parents had a criminal record, they will duplicate their activities and tend to become cruel. Besides that, education is also a significant influence on their future. Students studying in a high-quality school have more opportunities to develop their self and have good friends and teachers. In contrast, if they learn in a school for especially children, they can not give enough care from teachers and will be affected by naughty friends.
However, these days, despite living in bad conditions, some children are trying to learn to become good students. They do not be affected by their parents or living environment.
In conclusion, though the progress of contributing to a personality is a part of making the shape of a criminal, influences from living condition such as school, friends, parents, or neighborhood is the main factor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44520547945 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15789823475 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2782017703 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161536996208 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606063105161 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393224143567 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932875745693 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404412461727 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.