In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Recently, in business promotion, all the companies guarantee their products as something novel. This essay examines the reasons behind this trend as individuals’ choice to experience new things and the extravagant lifestyles of people in this cutting-edge era.
To commence with, there are numerous causes attributed to this development. Humans today are becoming more passionate about trying the new things, from which the business supplying such unique items is uplifting. For example, in the ordinary market of simple noodles in India, in 2020, there was an import of unique spicy noodle called ‘Ramen’. In the case of noodles, as this was a completely different taste that most of the people were not habitual of, the market of this has raised 5% selling in 2020 to 70% among all the noodles inside India. In addition, the lavish behavior of today’s mankind is another reason that can be utilized by most of the businesses saying their product is disparate than items of other businesses. Moreover, according to the survey conducted by Canberra University in Australia, it was found that the companies who advertised their products assuring their product as new in some aspect gained 66% more attention than the classical products. Thus, these are some of the causes that make most businesses today to emphasize their merchandise as something different.
I think this trend is greatly a positive behavior as trying something new is just like researching and people might get high quality items because of this development. For instance, the study conducted by Technical Institute of Food Technology in India found that 65% of new food products have used harmful artificial color seeming similar as those used by verified food companies. After they experimentally consume 100 new products, they found the color as detrimental. If they had not tried new food items, most of the people will suffer through some illnesses after eating those. Similarly, if there is an increase in market of latest products, the economy of country will also be increased. Given the above, it is clear that mentioning the unique characteristics of business commodity is positive development.
In conclusion, the motive behind advertising the product emphasizing novelty are because of people’s preference over such items and their profligate style of living and in my opinion, it is positive development as it resembles a form of research and allows individuals to choose the better among lot of commodities in the market. Hence, careful research in the product before releasing it throughout the market is mandatory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27884615385 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87266354121 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540865384615 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3828299233 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.176470588 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22747626062 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697006582307 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451653519919 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137723367488 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349802595367 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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