The most important aim of science is to improve people's lives. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that helping people’s lives get better is the main purpose of science. I strongly agree with this perspective, as I believe that our standards of living have evolved a lot since many inventions were come up.
First of all, science has the potential to help us solve the most stressful problems all over the world. This is because most of the inventions were created when people went through the most frustrating time in the past, such as pandemics, famine, drought, poverty, war…For example, the vaccine Covid-19 has been developed since an enormous number of populations died in 2020 due to the invasion of Coronavirus. Thanks to that, people nowadays continue to live normally again. While it is true that some inventions can lead to unintended consequences especially new technologies and artificial intelligence will result in thousands of workers losing their job, this is an adaptation for the high-quality careers appealing to the workforce.
Furthermore, the existence of science can widen humankind’s knowledge, since science can help eliminate doubts about unknown things happening in society. For instance, in the past folks usually saw blue sparks floating above the graves and they assumed that they were ghosts, which nowadays we discover that the reaction of phosphate in the bones of those who have just passed away to the oxygen in the atmosphere.
In conclusion, the ultimate goal of science is to make our life much better with the great effort of a lot of geniuses over a long period. In my point of view, science helps us to walk through the darkest time in the past and move forwards to modernization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...andemics, famine, drought, poverty, war…For example, the vaccine Covid-19 has been ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0695970696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80929695203 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.557558516 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.4 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137686047549 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567154757226 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356184452238 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773687408942 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032307356739 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.