Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In this day and age, many children spend a lot of time on their phone. From my point of view, many apps on mobile are more interesting and attractive than hanging out. I am of this opinion that there are more disadvantages than advantages to this phenomenon.
On the one hand, it exists several benefits to the aforementioned. Firstly, children can discover the world through their phone. The kids collect knowledge about nature and the different nations. For example, Youtube app provides lots of channels about animals and the environment for kids. Additionally, they can keep in touch with their friends via a lot of app messages such as Facebook, Zalo, Telegram, e.t.e. The pupil can talk and discuss with their friend, who is living in another country.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that spending too much time on a smartphone has more drawbacks than the benefits. The children suffer from various health problems due to using a lot of time on their phone. Kids have to face a lack of personal skills and obesity. To illustrate, the children will not go out of their room to play outdoor activities or not to communicate with others. If a person does not have any activities to burn their calories, he or she will be obese. Moreover, the kids lose themself in the visual world, which makes them feel scared of the real world and become an introverted person.
In conclusion, there are some positives to spending the time to use a smartphone. I strongly believe that greater we lose more than we gain from this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77528089888 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6333290452 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9600472747 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6875 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188243735928 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633824609558 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742636178171 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121827860378 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584144794503 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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