In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Do you agree or disagree with the above statement.
Car plays a crucial role in contributing to the various types of pollution such as, Air pollution, noise pollution. Though cars are creating a pollution in environment, there are various advantages over this. I totally disagree with the statement that provision of cars is in minimal use than it is now. There are three reasons why I feel this approach which I could delve into subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, the ratio of car users is nowadays increasing that is responsible for fulfilling the demand of the people. Within years increases, people demand also go on increasing which clearly identifies that cars population will increase with in upcoming years. Evidently, Cars are such a strong sense of vehicle people prefer to buy. If people get a chance to buy a vehicle, then obviously they buy cars. Nowadays, in 21st century for all upper-class family, there has been a provision of ‘one home, one car’.
In addition, population go on increasing with in twenty years. People want to live a luxurious life they want. Getting all sort of comfortable life, they buy a car in a family in order to enjoy life. As we seen in foreign country, without cars, it is too much hard for people to indulge in work. Every person needs a car. If there are four members in family, there will be four cars in it. Eventually, the car population will increase with in upcoming years.
Furthermore, environmentalist protest against use of cars because it creates a pollution in world. However, is the case, there will be provision of electric cars in future so that pollution will be minimal. Nowadays, electric car is on use in some countries. As people have public transportation to travel, but they feel difficult to manage time for work. On the other hand, nowadays, there is trend of showcasing our property to others and cars also be the same where people purchase for showing others and keep in house. This sort of activity goes on after some years also. Consequently, car population increase in the upcoming years.
To sum up, I agree with the statement that in near future, there is the provision of abundance of cars because of higher demand, population size and as a property showcase for others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pollution'.
Suggestion: pollution
...ise pollution. Though cars are creating a pollution in environment, there are various advan...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'saw'?
Suggestion: saw
... a family in order to enjoy life. As we seen in foreign country, without cars, it is...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pollution'.
Suggestion: pollution
... against use of cars because it creates a pollution in world. However, is the case, there w...
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Line 4, column 570, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...rt of activity goes on after some years also. Consequently, car population increase ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, i feel, in addition, sort of, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84920634921 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74796931368 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513227513228 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5191873084 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.375 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.20833333333 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250930030215 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756227506741 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732426215058 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14255569929 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260276273794 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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