The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given plans illustrate the changes on southwest airport before and after it was redeveloped a year later.
Overall, a comparison of the maps reveals that the airport has a little transformed from being totally being simple to more modern place. Moreover, some facilities will be developed in the future.
In terms of the current airport, there are 8 gates and walkway. The airport only has check-in, cafe, and security passport control as its facilities at departures side in the beginning, whereas the arrivals side is initially empty except the passport control customs.
Regarding the changes in the airport, a lot of gates will be built. The walkway facility is going to be replaced by sky train to access gates. In departure side, check-in point will be moved to the right and its prior location will be built a bag drop point. Below bag drop place, Cafe will relocate there. After pass through security passport control, shops will be built there one year later. In regard to arrivals side, additional cafe will have been constructed that is located between the passport control customs and the ATM. There are also car hire near the exit door. Despite minor changes on the airport, the departures and the arrivals side are remained at the same location as well as the security passport control and the passport control customs.
- Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the best place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Details of politicians private lives should not be published in newspapers To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledg 56
- Physical appearance may play an important role in many spheres of life in the person s success in school in relationships with people in the choice of a career path Say whether you agree or disagree with it and if you see it as a positive or negative fact 67
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'accessing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: accessing
...ty is going to be replaced by sky train to access gates. In departure side, check-in poin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98666666667 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45673676969 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2690956583 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3076923077 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119900483261 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529460040215 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455461080282 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907331184345 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529853219944 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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