The diagram shows the small-scale production of smoked fish
The picture gives information about how smoked fish are manufactured.
In general, it can be seen that there is a total of eight main stages in the process of smoked fish production, beginning with the preparation of fish and ending with the delivery of products to the market.
Taking a closer look at the picture, the first step is killing fish to prepare ingredients for creating the required products. After that, fish are soaked in water with salt for exactly 30 minutes before being grilled on fire in just 5 minutes. Then, these grilled fish are taken out to let them cool down before the next step.
The process continues with fish being steamed by smoke in the vast and covered by a wood panel in precisely 30 minutes. Subsequently, they are sent to the dying area to be dyed in yellow color to make them look more attractive. In the final stage, the finished products are delivered to the market to serve the customers by lorries or trucks.
- The most important aim of science should be to improve people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- The diagram shows the small scale production of smoked fish 84
- Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of Australian people who were born in different places of the world 67
- An increased number of people today change their career and living places in their lives Is it a positive or negative development 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6449704142 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48810763394 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1477391204 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193074902642 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844336547315 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575495515846 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131081370556 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407719028228 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.