Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have the freedom to do any sports or activity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
While some people come to a consensus on the regulations against extreme sports, others argue that they should be given official authorization to engage freely in any sports or activities. This essay will explore both perspectives and state my support for the former one.
On the one hand. proponents of risky sports emphasize the distinctive enjoyment they provide. It is inherent in human nature to have a preference for embracing life to the fullest. Many individuals, particularly youth, have reported that they derive immense pleasure in experiencing the fear of death along with the increased rate of their heartbeats every time they engage in in dangerous activities such as snowboarding and skydiving. Furthermore, these sports make ones step out of their comfort zones, and challenge their limits, which proves the saying "There is nothing a human cannot do". The risk-takers might discover their capacity to accomplish numerous goals, which are commonly deemed impossible, instilling greater confidence in them in their potential and abilities.
On the other hand, despite the above-mentioned virtues of extreme sports, there is an ethical issue related to its impact on individuals' well-being that justifies the prohibition of participating in such pursuits. Physical well-being is a prerequisite for taking risks through extreme sports. However, the organizers cannot assess the health of participants beforehand due to its inconvenience and their limited budgets. Consequently, certain individuals may face extreme conditions and challenges that are beyond their capabilities. They face the potential for diseases related to cardiac function or even worse, death. Indeed, it comes as no surprise to witness a person lose his life due to a unfortunate moment at which he decides to participate in hazardous sports. Additionally, there are a multitude of secure activities that can have an comparable impact on relaxation and contentment. A prominent example of this is swimming, which is enjoyed by the majority of the general public while requiring such minimal equipment.
In conclusion, while there are valid advantages of taking part in dangerous sports and activities, a strict ban on this hobby must be implemented by governmental institutions. It is advisable for individuals to choose safer pursuits like browsing the Internet and engaging in football to amuse themselves without jeopardizing their own safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Proponents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58760107817 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14812105124 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614555256065 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2326851276 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143547831729 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382082147394 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554540268253 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100110382994 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062932750914 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.