If a product is good or meets people’s needs, they will buy it. Therefore, advertising is unnecessary and no more than entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Agree or Disagree)
Opinions divide in whether advertising is necessary if customers tend to make purchase decisions according to their demands. Beside advertising programs’ drawbacks related to exaggerated and inaccurate information, I firmly believe that the advancement of advertising could bring undeniable advantages.
On the one hand, due to the proliferation of product-manufactured industries in the contemporary world, it is a challenge for people to compare and opt between a ton of rather similar products. As a result, the presence of advertising programs offers relevant knowledge and significant features of products so as to help buyers purchase a pertinant good and promote the healthy competition of several brands. In addition, customers benefit from such a phenomenon via discount programs.
On the other hand, in a tough competitive market, small companies suffer unexpected pressure from big and long-standing brands. If the government diminishes the scale of advertising, their products are unlikely to attract the public’s attention and reach potential customers. This phenomenon may facilitate the monopoly of a certain manufacturer and the destruction of start-up agencies, leading to an imbalance in economic development. Furthermore, the enormous profit from advertising programs that pays to the government in the form of taxes, also allocated to maintain the normal activities of a country, comprising education and health insurance.
In conclusion, despite several unsignificant disadvantages of advertising associated with their vague contents, I strongly disagree with the opinion that asserts it is an unnecessary and entertainment-purpose program due to its considerable benefits to the economic development of nations and enhance purchase options for customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ge and significant features of products so as to help buyers purchase a pertinant good a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9765625 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.588846859 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0345364185 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102594794747 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332600822563 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290721981021 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604437081073 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247362744998 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.7 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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