The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
For a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industory, or in other fields is instilling in them a sense of cooperation. Based on the enumnerated reasons mentioned below.
Firstly, having a sense of cooperation will help to understand differnet perspective of peoples. Each and every individual have different thinking methologies, there is more than a single way to approach a problem. Having different solution will help to make better decision and untimately resulting a better leader. According to the Harward Business review, 93% of the leaders in goverment, industory and in other fields tend to be cooperative.
Secondly, having collaberation will help to improve ones weakness. The best team in football is made up of selective players, that are not only from different areas of the world but also very distinct in play style. The collabration between them improves ones weakness in the team. Therfore an collerabration between groups/individual helps to achienve great heights and being effective leader.
Athough collerabration is an important for growth, the competition engender growth. A healthy competiton helps in ones growth. The greed of being one of the best will no doubt produce one of the best individual. But will it also be better leader? A leader is someone which people follows, trust and believe in. Based on US navy, as mentioned in there handbook, they prefer one who can collerabrate rather than an expert in one.
In conclusion, For preparing the young people to reach summit in there carrier, and be better leader in government, industory or in other fields. They should have a sense of collerabration. It impovers the ability to connect and perform better. Although collerabration is essential for leadership but having a sense of competition, a health competion will also prepare them for future endevours. therfore it should be mix and match of both, on singular level one is insufficent for the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08345927789 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.342868073 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2917415063 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796388608247 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14029791865 0.0758088955206 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195542594844 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18333514221 0.0667264976115 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.