Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Bad and good situation are both past and parcel of life. The situation is good or bad is as well dependent on an individual's perspective. However, as asked in the passage regarding unsatisfactory job or shortage of money if so considered as a bad situation is not something difficult or unachievable.
It is highly dependent on individual's situation, circumstance and their will power. Taking the unsatisfactory job example, there can be couple of situations about it like; the job is unsatisfactory but is highly paid. In this situation it depends what matters to the person job satisfaction or money. In situation where the job is unsatisfactory but also not highly paying, then in such cases one must definitely make an effort to get out of it and do something else, what he would like. A trial should certainly be made in my opinion. To get somewhere one has to leave from somewhere.
Opportunities often knock the door. At times we get right opportunity at the right time and at times opportunity comes when we aren't looking for it or when we need it we don't get it. The argument whether to accept the bad situation and keep or get or try and improve involves many other factors beyond risk and desire. At times, the social, political, cultural or family issues may also be a huge factor that surrounds being in a unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.
Many a times responsibilities and family security may not allow an individual to change their ‘unsatisfactory’ job or look for more opportunity to earn more money. Some may lack support, some risks and for some vision.
In order to conclude, I believe there is no one solution that works for all. It depends and differs for individuals. One must act according to their situation and environment than listening or reading something highly motivating. It may lead you to your destination and give happiness or it may lead to worse than what already is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... good or bad is as well dependent on an individuals perspective. However, as asked in the p...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...chievable. It is highly dependent on individuals situation, circumstance and their will ...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... and at times opportunity comes when we arent looking for it or when we need it we do...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nt looking for it or when we need it we dont get it. The argument whether to accept ...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...pt the bad situation and keep or get or try and improve involves many other factors bey...
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Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e a huge factor that surrounds being in a unsatisfactory job or shortage of money...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, well, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09054662165 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.959344708 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2105263158 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28248850487 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810093437058 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675845667526 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146517639313 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686305389677 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.