The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
The extinction of animal species is primarily attributed to various human activities on land and in the sea. In this essay, I will outline several reasons for this phenomenon and put forward some feasible measures to address it.
On the one hand, It’s undeniable that habitat loss, which leads to a multitude of animals being on the verge of disappearing as humans cut down trees for industry and build their houses, often results in the destruction and fragmentation of natural habitats, leaving species with inadequate living conditions and reduced access to resources. Climate change is another significant factor affecting animal species because of the release of Carbon dioxide from factories, which alters temperatures, weather patterns, and sea levels, affecting ecosystems and species' ability to adapt. Rising temperatures can disrupt breeding and migration patterns, leading to decreased survival rates.
On the other hand, to address these issues, various solutions can be implemented. First, The extinction of many species of animals is not only a national problem but a global problem, so those who govern the country need to cooperate in establishing and effectively managing protected areas, such as national parks and marine reserves, to provide safe havens for endangered species and their habitats. Secondly, Propaganda is needed to raise public awareness about the importance of biodiversity and the consequences of human actions, which can lead to more responsible behaviour and support for conservation efforts. For example, Hang propaganda signs on the roads, which each individual can see often.
Overall, It’s important to protect not only the animals in the fauna but also the wildlife, which needs everyone's contribution for a better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56826568266 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89393952302 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645756457565 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.3231281966 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.9 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227022050134 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930393697823 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132386166845 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138254003511 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934414002243 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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