Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or during their free time, and have health problems as s result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
In this 20th century, people hardly gets any chance to look after themselves, and engage themselves in a healthy rotuine. In the below paragraphs I have talked about the possible reasons and solutions to this problem.
Taking into account the causes for not engaging in the exercise, the first and foremost is the busy and the changing schedule of working people. For example, the person schedule changed from morning to over night not only makes him to change his daily schedule but also affect his physical as well as mental health due to change in the biological cycle. Evenmore, fatigue proves as a major cause for removing the physical task from their daily life. It is noticed that 90% of the people come back from work place to home in a drained out condition which encourages them to get in bed just after dinner. Hence, tiredness and busy routine makes people to eliminate exercise from their daily lifestyle.
Talking about the solution, building of parks and gym close to one's house will promote them to visit them. It is evident that if people findsw the facilities in vicinity , then the chance of people going at that place is higher. So, if gardens along with walking path are close to one's residence, then they might engage themsleves in walking. Futhermore, one can indulge in indoor exercise like yoga. spome people might not like to pay membersshipfor expensive gym, and will sacrfice their health over wealth. But if they engage in yoga, they can perform it form home without any requirement of any membership or investmnet in equipment. Therefore, indoor exercise will prove helpful to save money.
To conclude, one should not comprmise their health due to laziness or busy schedule but should visit close by gardens and should engage in light exercise.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ion, building of parks and gym close to ones house will promote them to visit them. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...people findsw the facilities in vicinity , then the chance of people going at that...
^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ns along with walking path are close to ones residence, then they might engage thems...
^^^^
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Spome
...n indulge in indoor exercise like yoga. spome people might not like to pay membersshi...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shipfor expensive gym, and will sacrfice their health over wealth. But if they en...
^^
Line 5, column 560, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forms'?
Suggestion: forms
...hey engage in yoga, they can perform it form home without any requirement of any mem...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, for example, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91694352159 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42960628726 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6918701259 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184420148054 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612927533234 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423281363484 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1012722321 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467756248917 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ion, building of parks and gym close to ones house will promote them to visit them. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...people findsw the facilities in vicinity , then the chance of people going at that...
^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ns along with walking path are close to ones residence, then they might engage thems...
^^^^
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Spome
...n indulge in indoor exercise like yoga. spome people might not like to pay membersshi...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shipfor expensive gym, and will sacrfice their health over wealth. But if they en...
^^
Line 5, column 560, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forms'?
Suggestion: forms
...hey engage in yoga, they can perform it form home without any requirement of any mem...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, for example, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91694352159 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42960628726 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6918701259 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184420148054 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612927533234 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423281363484 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1012722321 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467756248917 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.