Fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas are the main energy source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power, or wind power. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that in some parts of the world, while lots of countries are using fossil fuel as their major energy resource, there are some others altering to renewable energy. From my perspective, this trend is definitely an advantageous development.
Using coal, oil and natural gas as the main energy source can result in several problems on both people's health and the environment. Not to mention, the carbon dioxide emissions from vehicle engines or factories directly lower the quality of air condition that takes a toll on people’s health, especially respiratory-related diseases. Furthermore, the burning of fossil fuel also adds to the greenhouse effect that all the world is trying to reduce the carbon footprint. As a result, people may suffer from climate changes such as floods, drought or tsunami faster and faster.
On the other hand, there are numerous benefits when using alternative energy. To commence with, using renewable energy, for example putting solar panels above our houses or building wild farms, neither pollutes the air nor depletes natural resources. In terms of human health, it plays a role in reducing the risks of respiratory disorders. Moreover, such alternative energy is environmentally friendly that keeps our surroundings from deteriorating. It would minimize habitat destruction and tackle the pollution that stems from the activities of the fossil fuel extractive industries.
In conclusion, renewable energy usage as major resource rather than fossil fuel can bring several benefits to people on both national and global scale, which I believe is totally a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45059288538 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95317495677 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4891429618 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242395876666 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078762592842 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666909508023 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136409437026 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163977972237 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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