As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions for these problems?
It is argued that nowadays there is a growing of main cities and their problems are growing as well. In my opinion, I believe that growing cities have caused problems for young adults living in cities and I will give some solutons for this issues in this essay.
On the one hand, there are several problems caused for teenagers living in the cities as the result of continued growth. Firstly, there will be more polluted asmosphere when a major cities are growing, this will affect to the young people’s health a lot. For example, Ho Chi Minh City is a growth city, but using more private transport, this make the air in here become very polluted, so young people live in Ho Chi Minh City often affected health. Overall, the growing of many main cities will also cause many problems for young people living these cities.
On the other hand, I will give some wasy to help solve these problems. To begin with, government can encourage residents using more public transports than private transport. This will help decrease the rate of polluted asmosphere and make a heath of young people become more better. For instance, Switzerland is one of the clean nations all over the world because most of the citizen here using a environmentally friendly vehicle such as bus or bicycle, this make pollued asmosphere here decrased. In addition government can make more free accommodations for young people, this will help them reduce accommodation costs.
In conclusion, although there are many problems affected a lot for young people who are living in the cities, I have given some solutions to solve that problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88321167883 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49390540618 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510948905109 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9798560389 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401707514166 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169359984501 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130139622945 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286218378927 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126286150719 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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