Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the growth of technology in digital marketing, the creator of creative industry madly produce variation advertisement which contains beautiful combination of colors and other various element that become center of people attention and make them purchasing the product. While some people think this is extremely successful persuading, other believe there are no Influence for this. In this essay, i would like to discuss both of view.
On the positive side, nowadays in creative industry especially digital marketing becoming trend. It is due to the growth of technology which makes the animation of the advertisement "feel alive" in reality. Example, people now can feel real experience to put on some cloth they are interested in without buying it first and doing it online. They can customize the color they want and certainly the size so. The shop share the link with the advertisement where people can easily catch in with easy way to access. Unforgettable, the color of the advertisement is catchy and appealing. This phenomenon benefiting both side, for the customer they can feel new experiences and the seller can do selling without some high physical efforts.
However, like double-edged sword, the development of eyed-catching advertisement also lead people to some negative behavior. For instance, frequently people purchasing things just because the advertisement looks tempting while they are not really need that. Another issue is people are gained trust issue due to fraud often occurs. The eyed-catching advertisement somehow becoming tools for crimes. Consequently, now in society has gained some common mindset that an eyed-catching advertisement are just fraud and they leave it.
To sum up, i would like to argue that advertising and advertising nowadays are not just a common things and still successful at persuading us to buy things. Although modern advertising and advertisement are beautifully eyed-catching and benefiting either consumer also seller. The priority must be on how we become smart consumer, avoid lavish behavior and more careful whenever want to consume some advertisement.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e no Influence for this. In this essay, i would like to discuss both of view. ...
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Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...raud and they leave it. To sum up, i would like to argue that advertising an...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, really, so, still, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53658536585 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05033496956 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3263085572 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31680647817 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094565364532 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634138780858 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192873685199 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490069125863 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e no Influence for this. In this essay, i would like to discuss both of view. ...
^
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...raud and they leave it. To sum up, i would like to argue that advertising an...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, really, so, still, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53658536585 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05033496956 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3263085572 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31680647817 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094565364532 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634138780858 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192873685199 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490069125863 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.