Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The author claims two things here first is that too much money has been spent to maintain old buildings and second that new and modern buildings have to be built in place of old buildings. I completely disagree with the author in these claims.
Let us look at the first claim. First of all, in my opinion I feel that the quality of buildings that were built say a 100 years before is much better than those that are built now. The buildings in this age require constant looking after as some or the other issues start popping up in about three to five years after its built. These issues are caused due to improper structure, lack of quality materials, environmental issues and furthermore. So claiming that to maintain old buildings will cost more may not be accurate. In fact, I feel both the old and new buildings are taking up equal amount of money to get maintained.
Old buildings are a place of history for a lot of people. In my opinion a country's history is studied based on how much old buildings it has and also how old are the old buildings. Here the author claims that new and modern buildings have to be built in place of the old buildings. Although I agree that modern buildings might be necessary to keep up with the advancements in technology, I feel that demolishing old buildings and building new and modern buidlings on top of that may not be the solution.
Thus, I conclude by saying that both the old buildings and the new and modern buildings are necessary for a country and compromising on one for the other will only lead to further problems instead of solving them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, look, may, second, so, thus, i feel, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53979238754 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51792819688 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0611797307 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400875274431 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152693971504 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902171774844 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263590552071 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511614531696 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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