Teacher's salaries should be based on their student's academic performance
Teacher's are known for their contribution in student's life, career and knowledge. Teacher's are respected and have divine position in some religion like Hinduism. They shape student's life by identifying vulnerabilities, area's where student is facing difficulties and many more. Helping student's in overcoming such difficulties of studies or even life problem's to drive them to their achievement's in easiest and best possible way. Teacher's are not only in school but they can be anyone who help's in getting pragmatic experience like senior's, political opponent's, or even children's.
First is the example of Thomas Edison, the inventor of phonograph, light bulb and many more, till date he have more than 300 patent's registered across the globe. When he was toddler, his teacher wrote letter to his mother stating that he is dumb and school is not confident about his future. After reading letter, his mother took it seriously and started teaching him at home.
Second is the example of Ronaldo, the famous footballer who is loved by almost every football fan beyond his native country. From early age he was firm in pursuing his career in football. But his teacher, who found awkward repeated scolded him and even complained about his sports activities to his parents. But his mother, always supported him in achieving football dream and he himself carved to be the best footballer in world. And today, he is world's most expensive footballer in the world.
Third is the example of my friend Rohit, who was sincere in studies but not smart enough to achieve the goal's stated by his teacher's in easiest and best possible way. His teacher profoundly analysing his day to day habit's and activities. His teacher's started teaching him in such a way that Rohit used to feeling amusing while studying. By using his teacher's method to study always he scored 99% in 10th and 98.34% in 12th standard. Today he is working in fortune 500 company. He always gratitude his teacher for overcoming the fear of study and eventually helping him in developing the best of himself.
I do not agree with the statement, as some student's are not best in every aspect's some are better in sports while some in studies. If a single child fail's or have poor performance due to student's fault teacher should not be punished. But, teacher's should help student's in overcoming the difficulties and developing the best for the future of country. And, pass on the same discipline to upcoming generation's.
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- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions 50
- In any situation progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view 50
- All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children s schools 58
- Some people argue that successful leaders in government industry or other fields must be highly competitive Others people claim that in order to be successful a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others 83
- Teacher s salaries should be based on their student s academic performance 50
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... light bulb and many more, till date he have more than 300 patents registered across...
^^^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'study'.
Suggestion: always study
...udying. By using his teachers method to study always he scored 99% in 10th and 98.34% in 12t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 480, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...e is working in fortune 500 company. He always gratitude his teacher for overcoming the fear of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97342995169 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65037050519 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533816425121 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9393989006 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5217391304 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04347826087 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181168439893 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605613625459 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733106147436 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114137735464 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912770364622 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... light bulb and many more, till date he have more than 300 patents registered across...
^^^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'study'.
Suggestion: always study
...udying. By using his teachers method to study always he scored 99% in 10th and 98.34% in 12t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 480, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...e is working in fortune 500 company. He always gratitude his teacher for overcoming the fear of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97342995169 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65037050519 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533816425121 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9393989006 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5217391304 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04347826087 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181168439893 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605613625459 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733106147436 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114137735464 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912770364622 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.