Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Goverments always try to seek the best for their countries, They are usually in a situation where they have priorities to be achieved. If goverments are to choose between spending money on improving roads and highways or on public transportation. I think that the former option would be better. The basis of my view are based on several reasons.
First of all, traffic congestion which is a major problem in many countries would be solved. All of us know that traffic could be implicitly fureous in all aspects. It could delay people's commitments to significant issues. For example; If an on call doctor is having an emergency, where by he needs to be at the hospital for an urgent surgical operation, on which a person's life is completely dependent. In this case, stucking at traffic is definitely critical. Therefore, overcoming traffic problems could sometimes save people's life
Secondly, maintaining a good road's infrastructure, could also prohibit road accidents. So many accidents could occur due to the existence of an awful roads and highways. For example, my neighbor's daughter have had a tragic car accident last month, as a result she is suffering today from perminent disability, as she is no longer able to walk. Investigations have shown that her accident was due to a inappropriate design of a road intersection. Hence, fixing the roads and highways could always prevent such terrific accidents from happening.
Finally, it is more convenient to initially improve the roads and highways than improving public transportation. Because eventhough Public transportation are new, they would definitely deteriorate more rapidly when driven on old roads and highways. For instance; driving a car on a well paved road would maintain endurance of the car for a longer time, when compared to driving it on a bumped street regularly. Thus, improving the roads and highways shoud be an initial step to improving public transportation.
In conclusion, by improving the roads and highways in a country, the country itself would overcome the problem of traffic congestion, would also prohibit the increasing chance of road accidents. Moreover, public transportation would maintain a good state for longer time.
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Sentence: Because eventhough Public transportation are new, they would definitely deteriorate more rapidly when driven on old roads and highways.
Description: The fragment eventhough Public transportation is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: If goverments are to choose between spending money on improving roads and highways or on public transportation.
Error: goverments Suggestion: governments
Sentence: All of us know that traffic could be implicitly fureous in all aspects.
Error: fureous Suggestion: furious
Sentence: For example, my neighbor's daughter have had a tragic car accident last month, as a result she is suffering today from perminent disability, as she is no longer able to walk.
Error: perminent Suggestion: permanent
Sentence: Because eventhough Public transportation are new, they would definitely deteriorate more rapidly when driven on old roads and highways.
Error: eventhough Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Thus, improving the roads and highways shoud be an initial step to improving public transportation.
Error: shoud Suggestion: should
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