The internet has vastly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is commonly thought that it is easier to access information for people through the internet. While the thinking that information online can be misleading, it is my belief that it has a positive impact on people's lives.
It is understandable why the internet has become an effective tool in searching for more information. It must be recognized that there are many search engines created such as Google, Bing, Yahoo, and other numerous tools with billions of data to serve the demand for people's access to information. As a result, it is more convenient for individuals to look for anything anywhere with their phones or laptops. For example, in the past, people usually went to the library to find books they needed for study and research. However, nowadays, with the advancement of the internet, it is easier to search for those books online in different formats. Therefore, many people switch to using e-books instead of traditional books.
Despite the above arguments, there are still several drawbacks to finding information on the internet, typically there is more and more misinformation. In the current technological period, people can find multiple sources of information, but they do not know whether the information provided is completely accurate. As a result, it can lead to many misunderstandings of people about what they are searching for. Moreover, many people use the internet to spread misinformation related to sensitive issues about politics, violence, and more. For example, when people searched for historical information about the Vietnam - Cambodia border war, there was plenty of information saying that Vietnam invaded Cambodia, but they were wrong and in fact, Vietnam helped Cambodia escape the genocidal regime.
In conclusion, the internet is an excellent support tool for people to access information. However, people should be cautious about misleading information.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-09-25 | dung16022002 | 73 | view |
| 2022-08-11 | Charles Le | 89 | view |
| 2020-08-28 | Titi2lope | 84 | view |
| 2020-04-28 | NeutronnzZ | 84 | view |
| 2020-04-28 | NeutronnzZ | 84 | view |
- The charts show the proportion of male and female employees in different job categories in an engineering company in 2005 and in 2015 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 64
- In the past most people spend their entire career working for one company whereas people nowadays move from one job to another What are the advantages and disadvantages of each Which do you think is better 67
- The charts show the proportion of male and female employees in different job categories in an engineering company in 2005 and in 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests but based on the kinds of jobs they can get To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The internet has vastly increased our access to information To what extent do you think this is a good thing Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is commonly thought that it is easier...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a positive impact on peoples lives. It is understandable why the internet ha...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... e-books instead of traditional books. Despite the above arguments, there are s...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Cambodia escape the genocidal regime. In conclusion, the internet is an excell...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38590604027 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99599849462 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0400758626 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124409911773 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527365071676 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336931659191 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089565825407 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218251101378 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.