The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The charts give information on the proportion of individuals from different age ranges and genders in Britain buying three types of music albums, including pop, rock and classical music.
Overall, there are more male album purchasers than females in all three types. While people aged 16 to 44 prefer to buy rock and pop albums, these albums are the least purchased types by the older generation (45+). Instead, music listeners above 45 years old would mostly buy classical music albums. Classical music albums also attract young music enjoyers ( 25-34 years old) as well, but the proportion of teenagers buying them is the lowest among the three music album types.
In terms of genders, there are obviously more men buying albums than women in every category, but both genders mostly buy rock music albums. Considering pop music, men account for nearly 30% of all buyers whereas the ratio of women is just 20%. There is also a similar gap between male and female purchasers in the category of rock music, where men’s percentage is nearly 10% higher than that of women. Classical music albums attract the least buyers from two genders, respectively nearly 10% for males and just above 5% for females.
Pop and rock music albums suit various ages ranging from teenagers (30%) to the 25-34 age group ( over 30%) and 35-44 years old listeners (nearly 30%), except for middle-aged music enjoyers with just approximately 10%. Middle-aged music listeners make up 20% of people who buy classical albums, but the proportion of teenagers purchasing classical music cannot reach 5%. A similar pattern can also be seen in the 35-44 age group, where just under 5% of them buy classical-related albums. However, classical music albums still gain 15% of 25-34 years old buyers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 292.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02397260274 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45437586251 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2102417327 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191823660504 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874689559409 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388361652359 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14142913581 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215772319361 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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