some people think that the best way is reading new through newspapers while other think that reading news in the media platforms is better, give opinion about both views and give your opinion.
In the present-day, some people argue that newspapers are the most effective way to approach news while others are willing to say that reading news also can be done through media platforms. Personally, I tend to concur with the latter view for several reasons, however both of these views have their own merits and downsides which will be illustrated in this essay.
At First, accessing information through newspapers was a conventional method for every age bracket. For clearly, since the industrialization period, the press became an indispensable aspect of the citizen's life, by accommodating people's demand for news, nations could receive the understanding of people in a particular circumstance, especially in the recession period. Such an advantage can be seen through the covid pandemic of the US, when the government's system had to struggle with the adverseness from the disease. However, due to the constantly updating news through the press, the citizen can have a brief judgment, understanding and supporting the government to downplay the situation.
But when it comes to the modern day, reading news by newspapers tends to be inflexible and inconvenient. On the other side, media platforms and online-applications are practical choices for the users to search for news. Nowadays, people are suffered from their hectic schedules, reading news in through the newspaper is a misfit option which are impeded by the time constraint, but with the dramatic improvement of technology and cyber-space, news can easily be approached by application in the mobile phones which are more convenient and can help the reading news at ease. Vnexpress is an example, which website can provide a vary of information in the world without any limit in location or time.
In conclusion, although newspapers have played an essential role in the past on providing new information, in the present reading news can be flexible and more helpful by searching in the social medias and online platforms.
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- some people think that the best way is reading new through newspapers while other think that reading news in the media platforms is better give opinion about both views and give your opinion 78
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30914826498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10326410202 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583596214511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2224710355 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219315477094 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879853035528 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070615159687 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144986063862 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542116983046 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.