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The chart below shows the changes in car ownership in Great Britain between 1961 and 2001

The line chart depicts the variation in the percentage of car possessorship among the British populace from 1961 to 2001.
In general, the data reveals a considerable change in car ownership over the four decades. Car was a less popular household item in 1961 than it was in 2001. 65% of the populace had no car while the figure dropped significantly to just under 30% after 40 years.
During the initial two decades, spanning from 1961 to 1981, there was a notable surge in car ownership. The majority of British families possessed one car reached a peak at 50%. Concurrently, families that owned two or more cars accounted for 15%. In contrast to the substantially increasing number in car ownership, 1981 witnessed a sharp decrease in the percentage of households without cars by 30%.
The subsequent two decades, from the years 1981 to 2001, saw a continuous upward trend in the number of British households purchasing an additional car. Specifically, the proportion of families possessing two or more cars reached its peak at almost 30%, though families with only one car were still the majority, with 42%. Meanwhile, the percentage of households without a car steadily declined to less than 30% by the conclusion of 2001.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, in contrast, in general, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97572815534 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90664840634 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558252427184 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0087494819 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24361999791 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106600917332 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526516866874 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172276773004 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349603145203 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, in contrast, in general, in contrast to

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