In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people think that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers while others think that the problem can be solved by proving computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
it can be commonly seen that a weaker section of communities in developing nations are derprived of education. some people believe that providing more schools and teachers will resolve this problem while some other believe that providing digital access would be better solution. In this essay, I will discuss both these beliefs and provide my own opinion.
To begin with solution number one, More faculties and schools in rural area will definitely provide those underpriviledge students easy access to education. if there are schools at their local places, they donot have to commute far, spend money to commute and also parents could continue their job without being bothered about pick and drop of their children to the education institution.
On the other hand providing digital devices and internet to children of weaker section of community, is also a appreciable idea. On one side, it will allow children to take education from comfort of their home and also it will make them equally tech-smart as the children of other section's of the society. but their are some problems of this medium, first of all,with digital devices and free internet, student will not only get access to education but also to other digital entertainments such as games, videos, social media etc. this medium could be misued or may be easily used for other tasks except studies. Another sidefall of this approach of education is that student might find it difficult to operate and learn digital devices so it would become a barrier in studies instead of a boom.
To conclude, I believe that if we honestly want to provide benefits to this rural community children then we should opt option number one that is providing teachers and schools to them, as it would be easy way of learning, free from distractions of digital media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, may, so, then, while, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01655629139 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54940438983 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55298013245 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1953109355 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.727272727 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290866112916 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112558873965 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742699178803 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182614691906 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718195716815 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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