The picture below shows the process of producing ceramic pots Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The picture below shows the process of producing ceramic pots. Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The picture depicts the process of manufacturing ceramic pots.

Overall, this linear process comprises twelve general steps, initiating with exploiting raw materials and culminating with ceramic pots.

To begin, a digger is responsible for exploiting raw materials, which is followed by a transportation of those materials to the plant by a truck, in which the sealed process of producing ceramic pots is conducted. Raw materials, then, are passed into a crusher. Once this step is completed, raw materials are turned into fine powder, which was undergone the process of being mixed with water (or stuff like that). Following this, the mixture can be shaped to assembled clay pots after being moulded and dried within 4-6 hours.

These assembled clay pots continue to be heated up in an oven with 1000 degrees celsius. After that, the heated pots are colored, with a subsequent color firing step, creating finished pots.

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