Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?
In recent times, the humanity is increasingly facing up with the urgent need for food supplies. While this phenomenon is commenced from a wide range of justifications, the collaboratives endeavor should be taken by countries around the globe to mitigate this problem.
On the first hand, the pressing shortage of food sources is ascribed to a myriad of explanations, chief of which is the humanitarian disasters in certain corners of the world. As a matter of fact, in times of epidemics or wars, the supply chains might be broken, thereby interrupting the imports of food between countries. Consequently, citizens in nations without self-sufficiency in agricultural products tend to purchase food supply in large quantities for fear of the perpetuation of wars and diseases. Take the outbreak of Covid-19 epidemic for example. Most people are afraid of potential lack of milk, corn, and staples, so there was then a mentality popular among Vietnamese people that if they had not collected sufficient food supply, they would have been at risk of starvation. In other words, a sense of insecurity leads millions to the decision of hoarding large amount of food, hence a rocketing demand for food in a national scale.
On the other hand, there are some solutions could be adopted to mitigate the aforementioned issue, one of which is for the state to put more investment in the development of agricultural sector. In particular, there should be a shift from traditional agriculture to the production of GM food. GM food, as well as genetically-modified food, is the food from crops whose genes are scientifically changed so that it can produce more fruits and not be affected by diseases. Therefore, this kind of agricultural production is capable of guaranteeing a considerably higher yield and meet the food demand of population. To exemplify, some African countries used to suffer from famine in the past; however, thanks to the introduction of GM food, it saved them from the trouble of having to import huge amounts of food from abroad. Long story short, once a country has been self-sufficient in food product, its population would be more likely to feel a sense of security and probably stop storing a large amount of food products even in tough times.
In conclusion, the escalating need for food is attributable to the increasing frequency of wars or disasters and the public concerns about the lack of food. Nevertheless, there are actions which need to be taken in order to deal with this issue, including the introduction of GM food.
- Since travelling abroad became relatively inexpensive more countries opened their doors for foreign tourists Is it a positive or negative trend Give your opinion and include relevant examples 89
- Many people believe the government should spend money on faster public transport Others think that money should be spent on different aspects of public transportation such as cost reduction and environment conservation Discuss both views and give your opi 73
- Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive Other think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity Discuss both views and state your opinion 84
- Some people believe the purpose of education should be to help the individual to become useful to the society while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions Discuss both sides and give your opinion 84
- Some people think that the only way to judge someone s success in business is by the amount of money they make is this a true indicator of success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'lacks'.
Suggestion: lacks
...le. Most people are afraid of potential lack of milk, corn, and staples, so there wa...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, as a matter of fact, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05463182898 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13074765804 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536817102138 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3211867697 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3125 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204244175435 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744003847514 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500149665619 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135480501605 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104258941022 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.