. Today, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this case? How should they be punished ?
It is acknowledged that children and teenagers are perpetrating more immoral actions nowadays. This essay attempts to shed lights on the driving factors behind this phenomenon before outlining several viable solutions that should be adopted to tackle this worrying problem.
There are a host of compelling reason as to why young people are more prone to commit crimes. One rationale is that the insufficient knowledge about laws in their ages could bring about to their illegal actions later on. This argument could be reinforced by the fact that educational institutions nowadays primarily focus on teaching theories rather than the moral value on students. As a consequence, it gives rise to children mindsets that well-behaved behaviors are unnecessary. Another justification is that the children whose environment is widespread of social issues may be adapted to the illegal behaviors. For instance, a child who grow up in a neighborhood with drugs problems could turn into a drug dealer himself, since he has witnessed drug abuse and addicted as a norm. Therefore, this could act as an urge for the youth to engage in criminal behavior in the foreseen future.
To combat this serious concern, the following essential steps should be taken to mitigate this phenomenon. One notable feature is that in terms of misdemeanor crimes, juveniles should be sent into reform school. Subsequently, they could realize their wrong behavior and practice positive value during the reformation process. In addition, if sinners are too young to be sentenced, the punishment should be delayed instead of converting responsibilities to the sinners’ guardians on account of offenders might think that there are some people address their problem. As a result, this could act as the precursor for perpetrators continuing to break the law.
In conclusion, there are some serious repercussions attributable to this negative tendency, and it is crucial that the aforementioned measures be implemented to deal with this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40952380952 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02319912183 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4337391968 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271714854416 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832326380244 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545769531448 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160516270941 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501664461929 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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