Some people enjoy change and look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to remain the same and do not like any changes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons and relevant examples to support your answer. You should write at least 350 words.
In this modern society, many people embrace change and eagerly anticipate new experiences. Others opine oppositely, they prefer the stability of a consistent life. In my view, there is a strong case to be made for both sides of the debate.
Ready to adapt to the changes in life does bring plenty of benefits. The first thing worth mentioning is that new challenges create the novelty and variety in the way of life which triggers the excitement in exploring new opportunities, meeting different people,... It is this way that provides us with high adaptability and creativity. Moreover, we are able to broaden our horizon when facing modifications in our life. This leads to the improvement in our personal growth and self- discovery. In addition, accepting the alterations means that we regard changes as tha catalyst for progress in society, which drives a strong motivation for us to make progress. Juxtaposing a child undergoing a plethora of challenges and the one who is overprotected and detest changing, we will immediately recognize that the former one is more confident and creative than the latter one.
On the other hand, another group claims that incorporating new things into our daily routines can be problematic. They insist that if people want to be on the safe side, avoiding change is a wise decision. In this regard, they maintain that those who decide to change their job are less likely to get a raise or promotion compared with long-term employees. However, I do not find this argument convincing, as a new career can open the doors to better future prospects because leaving an unpleasant job in search of a decent one that aligns with one's talents can lead to several positive side effects, such as expanding soft skills like interpersonal skills. Moreover, interested people do their best to work efficiently; therefore, they will benefit from a well-paid salary in the long run.
To conclude, preference for change or stability depends on personal beliefs and specific circumstances. In my view, people should be aware that change can be beneficial in several ways such as finding better employment possibilities for learning necessary skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14887640449 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92218413929 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1277286828 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.823529412 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141022268771 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446103516417 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319250192507 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926356640364 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317828469672 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.