The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given maps illustrate the present construction of Norbitor industrial area and proposed plans for its renovation.
Overall, this area is expected to experience significant changes with the building of housing. Besides, the expansion of roads will be to connect to the north West and north of town. At present, there is a roundabout to link a street to the South and a street to the East, along with industrial areas at the both side and the end of the latter. In future, these factories will be destroyed to make way for housing, school at the end of the street and the extra construction of playground to the North. At the top of the map, a short road will be constructed to connect to new residential areas across a river by a new bridge.
To the North West of the map, another road will be build to link to housing areas which are located in the end and the one side of this street. At the bottom left corner, there is a plan to erect the shops which is opposite the medical center to the South East of roundabout.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...he both side and the end of the latter. In future, these factories will be destroyed to m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41798941799 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56269337403 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.179356624 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.375 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104792282599 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520177304613 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334515820485 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893669419791 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336800049844 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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