Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is argued that these days, every nation is becoming much more the same as a result of people have the ability to purchase the same goods from anywhere they want. Although it will have some drawbacks, I believe that this development brings more positive results.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages for the argument of some countries are now less different from others since people are able to buy merchandises all around the world. Firstly, it makes citizens cost millions of dollars when they get what they want that does not exist in their country and do harm to the environment as well. Taking goods from another nation will request people to spend money on either travelling to that nation or delivering from that nation by trains, airplane, etcetera which will release carbone dioxide as using too much fossil fuels. Secondly, when a nation become more and more similar to another one, it leads to the emergence of a new issue which is the disappearance of a culture, as residents cannot remmeber what makes the difference of that country.
On the other hand, I assert that the consequences of this hot issue are positive developments. First and foremost, it allow consumers to have various choices for any kind of products which can satisfy their needs. For example, a girl when considering to buy cosmetics, she can think of local brand, like M.O.I, or global brand, such as Dior, 3CE. Apart from this, people who would like to move to another country to start a new life can get used to with that strange region as fast as possible because they an feel the familiar atmosphere from their home country. To illustrate, in the USA, there are some regions where several Vietnamese families live there called Vietnamese’s communities which will let the new comer feel peace in mind due to having numerous relatives to live with.
In summary, personally, I state that it is not bad for countries to become more similar to another ones due to the ability to purchase the same goods from any region in the world. Each country will have its own uniqueness which will allow it to be differentiated from any country in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, in summary, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79032258065 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5411800908 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5909540003 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.5 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273591371303 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955727138341 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073008378965 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176435495432 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623566727202 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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